Very nice, you have potential :)
The animation was superb, but your choice of colors and your art is lacking.
Before starting Green Chronicles II (which you better make) I suggest you practice drawing. Take time to study lighting and color choice, both of which are crucial in making something look realistic. A general rule of thumb is to stay away from basic colors like the hardcore green you used on the main guy, and use more exquisite colors. Play with the color mixer and don't be afraid to expiriment.
Sound was amazing, the fighting was well choreographed (I loved the chase scene), but it could have done with a little blood :)
Very good work, leaves me wanting more.
Im not sure if I wanna make the second part because i need more feed-back (so far its all positive) but maybe if this one gets to 3.00/5.00 i will defenetly make the second part. OH and yeah I'm an awsome artist, but its harder in flash and i needed to finish this movie right away to show it to some friends so i didnt have enough time to do it better (i was gonna add more effects and colors) I was a lil skeptic about the colors I used as well, maybe i can change them by saying that it was night.
(Probably make the fight in the day)
more action, more camera views, more colors, more artwork, probably less time though but everything else makes up for it. sound good? please respond if you have any ideas like should i make another chase scene or what else should i change. THX for taking time to view and review my movie.I love the ratings right now =)
Not to bad, but I remember the jokes being better.
I'm glad you two have finally gotten around to wrapping this project up, although I was expected it to be longer, and all about Runescape. There really weren't many Runescape pwns to be seen.
Not too bad though, especially considering how dated it is. I'm expecting better from the next one though!
Dont you mean <B> I </B> got around to finishing it? kyle didnt have anything left to do really.
and you and me need to get working in BP again
It was good but...
Very smooth animation. A good stick figure movie is always nice to see. Unfortunately it isn't finished, and there are no sound effects.
The only other thing that I didn't like was the choice of music. I am a huge Tool fan, but the Grudge didn't seem to fit in the violent scenes.
Very nicley done
Splendid animation, but more tweens than I had expected. For constructive criticism, when people run, they lean forward so their backs are bent. But with that aside, very nicely done. I like how you limited the color choice, it gives it more of a mysterious tool feel to the piece.
Nicely done, tool is one of my favorite bands also. I've been wanting to make a music video for their song lateralus, because of the subtl messages and such. Also because it is a plain awesome song. But the song is pretty long to actually animate. I'm not sure if people would find it entertaining all the way through.
But my favorite ELO track is Mr Blue Sky.
On top of that, if you have talent, which we all know you do, then why do you submit crap like this?
Still a beautiful piece of work
I saw this on youTube through your thread *yours as in poopMyster). It really is a shame that the quality was nearly 100& diminished, you were only at half the file size limit, I know it could have been exported at better quality. Oh well.... what are you going to do...
I would have given you a ten be it that the quality was better ( because I know it could've been)
You made me laugh so hard it hurts! This series is hilarious! You have to continue, chances are you will get my 5 on every one of them ^^
Maybe a little overrated, but its still awesome!!
Yea... That pretty much summed it all up.
I'm sorry you feel that way dude, seriously that sucks...I hope I do more to deserve a score like this next time for you.
Thanks anyway ;)
Quite the news broadcast
I can really relate to that broadcast, it was true in many aspects. It made me wonder though, are you from Oregon or Washington or Northern, or anywhere else in the Cascade Pacific? A couple clues led me to that conjecture.
Not even close. It's the weather map, isn't it.
Awesome in pretty much all aspects
This was, and still will be next time around, an awesome flash. The style was original and dazziling, the syncing between the screaming vengeance harvested through the musical power of the amazing trans siberian orchestra and the simple, yet so elaborate muffins was truly perfect, of course, you can never go wrong by adding a dancing chicken :D
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