Very nice, you have potential :)
The animation was superb, but your choice of colors and your art is lacking.
Before starting Green Chronicles II (which you better make) I suggest you practice drawing. Take time to study lighting and color choice, both of which are crucial in making something look realistic. A general rule of thumb is to stay away from basic colors like the hardcore green you used on the main guy, and use more exquisite colors. Play with the color mixer and don't be afraid to expiriment.
Sound was amazing, the fighting was well choreographed (I loved the chase scene), but it could have done with a little blood :)
Very good work, leaves me wanting more.
Im not sure if I wanna make the second part because i need more feed-back (so far its all positive) but maybe if this one gets to 3.00/5.00 i will defenetly make the second part. OH and yeah I'm an awsome artist, but its harder in flash and i needed to finish this movie right away to show it to some friends so i didnt have enough time to do it better (i was gonna add more effects and colors) I was a lil skeptic about the colors I used as well, maybe i can change them by saying that it was night.
(Probably make the fight in the day)
more action, more camera views, more colors, more artwork, probably less time though but everything else makes up for it. sound good? please respond if you have any ideas like should i make another chase scene or what else should i change. THX for taking time to view and review my movie.I love the ratings right now =)
Not to bad, but I remember the jokes being better.
I'm glad you two have finally gotten around to wrapping this project up, although I was expected it to be longer, and all about Runescape. There really weren't many Runescape pwns to be seen.
Not too bad though, especially considering how dated it is. I'm expecting better from the next one though!
Dont you mean <B> I </B> got around to finishing it? kyle didnt have anything left to do really.
and you and me need to get working in BP again
It was good but...
Very smooth animation. A good stick figure movie is always nice to see. Unfortunately it isn't finished, and there are no sound effects.
The only other thing that I didn't like was the choice of music. I am a huge Tool fan, but the Grudge didn't seem to fit in the violent scenes.
I remember this :)
And its still just as funny now as it was when I saw it the first time. Nice job :)
I know you can do better than this. Apply yourself next time >:|
The pumpkins still come too fast and in too great of numbers, even if this was your intention, its an odd intention.
Graphics- the menu was lacking much luster and so was all of the other artwork.
Style- creating a game in a couple hours isn't a good style; if you are going to make a game at least put a little effort into it.
Sound- The music was good, but the game could have benefitted from some sound effects.
Violence- None, doesn't apply
Interactivity- Take some more time on the engine, the darn pumpkins came too fast and since they were on an interval, they built up when the game lagged. Also, there needs to be some sort of way to lose instead of endless gameplay and submit score whenever.
Humor- Doesn't apply
Overall- You know as well as I do that this is about the score you deserve :(
meh, it was never meant to be big, i didnt even expect it to get a score higher than like 2.3, so i really wasnt dissapointed. I just threw it together before i had to leave for hunting.
I managed to get a score of like 1000 (by luck) and i really think that if the pumpkins dropped slower it would be to boring. but as i recall *thinking back to defenceless stick* you have had a lot of things that you were sure wouldnt matter when it was released that became the doom of it.
the menu is fine, i really dont see why it needs to be any better.
the style is there, just not a lot of developed artwork. I had literally 3 hours to make this game and pack for a 5 day hunting trip so i think i did okay in that respect.
i was going to have more sound effects, but i ran out of time.
and the engine is fine. maybe a bit more variety with the pumpkins and a random speed and spin, and a bigger stage (but again no time)
and BTW it does end, when the song is over. i am pretty sure i mentioned that it the comments...
wow thanks for the 4, i woulda been happy with a 3.99999999(99), i guess you were feeling generous....
(i less than three pity votes *thinks back to defenceless stick*)
*****I HAVE NO PLANS TO FURTHER DEVELOPE THIS GAME AT ALL*****
And so the beast has been unleashed...
Two months of sculpting, grueling, caffiene injections, and cooperation has led to this. This diamond in the portal. Congrats to all who made it possible, and congrats to me waking up at 9am with only 7 hours of sleep to catch it under judgement :)
Haha. That's commitment, lol. Thanks for the great review DEF :). Loads of reviews already :)
Puts that Holiday Happiness on your face :)
I'm trying to get into the habit of reviewing all the songs I will be using in my flash games, and I am planning on using this song for menu music. It has a good feel to it and isn't overly emotional like a lot of the other songs. It puts a smile on your face and that is all that is necessary.
Great job! :)
Thanks man! I appreaciate the support.
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